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[Chorus: Efya]
I hear voices whisper my name
Can you hear them, all that they say
I will be more than you thought I could be
And these voices

[Verse 1: Ladipoe]
I hear voices and things of that nature
That's not unlike a prophet receiving divine favor
Expected like that prophet that's promised in Isaiah
I struggle to wear the crown I'm in need of a size greater

If I'm doing this at all it's nothing besides major
We're in it for the profit, the plot is to buy acres
So tell your CEO when he's ready to f**k with Poe
He can call me up on the phone cos I'm ready to sign papers

My path is on display look at that good view
Think of my MBA maybe put it to good use
See I have to ask myself when I think of an office life
Could I give up being a rapper, there's only a good few, you see
Yeah
I'm pretty sure, you can check attendance
I'm not in their class we don't even share a common entrance
I don't say this to be rude when I'm sitting in my room I just listen and I swear I hear voices

[Chorus: Efya]
I hear voices whisper my name
Can you hear them, all that they say
I will be more than you thought I could be
And these voices

[Verse 2: Ladipoe]
I been told about life you have to pay your own way
So I'm hated at Julius Berger coz I paved my own way
Look, I told my fam that I have to hold 'em down
Till we all carry pounds, I mean the type you don't weigh

Some things I don't say, even though I'm meant to be going for the top right? like a well taken penalty
Voices! have me thinking that I'm quite dope I know this s**t I'm smoking is not the reason for these high hopes

My girl is worried, she always says that I don't sleep enough
My manager keeps calling telling me that I'm not deep enough
Adding to the pressure as if the climb isn't steep enough
But he's just hoping that I keep it up
Truly Poe, for you not to blow we can't afford it this year
Forget about an album it's not important this year
They can't walk in your shoes coz they're imported this year
Still I find you in your room saying, “Chin, really man, I hear voices”

[Chorus: Efya]
I hear voices whisper my name
Can you hear them, all that they say
I will be more than you thought I could be
And these voices

I hear!

[Voicemail recording]
Hi Poe,
Happy Sunday
Yes I listen to your music, and I like it
I'm one of your biggest fans
Keep up the good work.
My prayer is that God will take you to places that you never imagined in your life.
I love you, and I'll keep praying for you.
Bye.
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[Chorus: Efya]
I hear voices whisper my name
Can you hear them, all that they say
I will be more than you thought I could be
And these voices

[Verse 1: Ladipoe]
I hear voices and things of that nature
That's not unlike a prophet receiving divine favor
Expected like that prophet that's promised in Isaiah
I struggle to wear the crown I'm in need of a size greater

If I'm doing this at all it's nothing besides major
We're in it for the profit, the plot is to buy acres
So tell your CEO when he's ready to f**k with Poe
He can call me up on the phone cos I'm ready to sign papers

My path is on display look at that good view
Think of my MBA maybe put it to good use
See I have to ask myself when I think of an office life
Could I give up being a rapper, there's only a good few, you see
Yeah
I'm pretty sure, you can check attendance
I'm not in their class we don't even share a common entrance
I don't say this to be rude when I'm sitting in my room I just listen and I swear I hear voices

[Chorus: Efya]
I hear voices whisper my name
Can you hear them, all that they say
I will be more than you thought I could be
And these voices

[Verse 2: Ladipoe]
I been told about life you have to pay your own way
So I'm hated at Julius Berger coz I paved my own way
Look, I told my fam that I have to hold 'em down
Till we all carry pounds, I mean the type you don't weigh

Some things I don't say, even though I'm meant to be going for the top right? like a well taken penalty
Voices! have me thinking that I'm quite dope I know this s**t I'm smoking is not the reason for these high hopes

My girl is worried, she always says that I don't sleep enough
My manager keeps calling telling me that I'm not deep enough
Adding to the pressure as if the climb isn't steep enough
But he's just hoping that I keep it up
Truly Poe, for you not to blow we can't afford it this year
Forget about an album it's not important this year
They can't walk in your shoes coz they're imported this year
Still I find you in your room saying, “Chin, really man, I hear voices”

[Chorus: Efya]
I hear voices whisper my name
Can you hear them, all that they say
I will be more than you thought I could be
And these voices

I hear!

[Voicemail recording]
Hi Poe,
Happy Sunday
Yes I listen to your music, and I like it
I'm one of your biggest fans
Keep up the good work.
My prayer is that God will take you to places that you never imagined in your life.
I love you, and I'll keep praying for you.
Bye.