Revision: It's You - Dreaming — Lady Zamar
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[Verse 1]

I can't go on no more

These dreams have me tossing oh

I'm somewhere

I don't want to be no more

I don't wanna be alone

Time has shown no remorse

I need a change

I'm drowning oh

Angels be near

This fight is lost

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Reprise]

Come to me

Say to me

That you're my peace

You'll fight for me

Your empty words

Bring me no peace

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Pre Hook]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)



[Chorus]

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Verse 2]

These day dreams

Lucid peace

Beautiful desires

Have me feeling oh

Coz it is so wrong

That I am alone

Waiting for the day you'll come

Sunshine and fairies

Raindrops and cherries

Sunshine and fairies

Raindrops and cherries

My knees are weak

From kneeling to Him

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Pre Hook]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)



[Chorus]

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Pre Chorus]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)



[Chorus]

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Reprise]

Come to me

Say to me

That you're my peace

You'll fight for me

Your empty words

Bring me no peace

Please end it

I need you to end it



[Pre Chorus]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2).
Additions (In green):
[Verse 1]

I can't go on no more

These dreams have me tossing oh

I'm somewhere

I don't want to be no more

I don't wanna be alone

Time has shown no remorse

I need a change

I'm drowning oh

Angels be near

This fight is lost

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Reprise]

Come to me

Say to me

That you're my peace

You'll fight for me

Your empty words

Bring me no peace

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Pre Hook]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)


[Chorus]

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Verse 2]

These day dreams

Lucid peace

Beautiful desires

Have me feeling oh

Coz it is so wrong

That I am alone

Waiting for the day you'll come

Sunshine and fairies

Raindrops and cherries

Sunshine and fairies

Raindrops and cherries

My knees are weak

From kneeling to Him

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Pre Hook]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)


[Chorus]

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Pre Chorus]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)


[Chorus]

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it

It's you of you (x9)

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Reprise]

Come to me

Say to me

That you're my peace

You'll fight for me

Your empty words

Bring me no peace

Please end it

I need you to end it


[Pre Chorus]

It's hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2)

It hurts the most when I'm dreaming

Day dreaming (x2).
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